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Reason
Could be longer. Needs a map.
Support
  1. Maurreen 07:07, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Dmcdevit 18:21, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  3. Tuf-Kat 03:18, Feb 21, 2005 (UTC)
  4. kaal 06:02, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  5. Darwinek 19:32, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • Has a CIA map and a map of the administrative divisions. What specific map did you have in mind? --Golbez 21:07, Feb 19, 2005 (UTC)
  • The map does not show for me, but the box does. Maurreen 01:46, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Reason
Writing needs work. It's not cohesive and there are grammar problems. Attribution is also weak. On the other hand, this could become contentious.
Support
  1. Maurreen 06:29, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Litefantastic 17:48, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  3. 119 19:28, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  4. Darwinek 19:30, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  5. GuloGuloGulo 01:44, Feb 25, 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • Totally agree. Important but volitile subject; heavily POV just now. -Litefantastic 17:48, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Reason
The article is now fairly deep but narrow.
Support
  1. Maurreen 05:58, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Tuf-Kat 17:47, Feb 19, 2005 (UTC)
Comments

Reason
Mostly about the history, little on the principles and practices.
Support
  1. Maurreen 05:58, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments

Reason
Saw this on the Wikipedia: featured article removal candidates. It's a holdover from the less stringent FA rules, I'd guess. It definitely needs work -- that list is ugly, it's nowhere near comprehensive and there's a single reference! --Dmcdevit 07:35, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Support
  1. Dmcdevit 07:35, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Maurreen 08:20, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  3. Tuf-Kat 01:29, Feb 24, 2005 (UTC)
  4. Felix Wan 22:55, 2005 Feb 26 (UTC)
Comments

Reason

I tried to get this passed to FA, but couldn't. Too heavily biased and very rumor-ridden, it needs help.

Support
  1. Litefantastic 17:46, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. 119 08:21, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  3. Maurreen 04:22, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • Not that far away from FA, methinks. It needs POV patching and maybe some reasearch, but the framework is there. -Litefantastic 17:46, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Reason
Both the voyager missions did a lot of science and very little is covered in the article.
Support
  1. kaal 06:11, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. 119 08:21, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • cannot nominate for the COTW as not stub, but still very brief.

Reason
Both the voyager missions did a lot of science and very little is covered in the article.
Support
  1. kaal 06:11, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. 119 08:21, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • cannot nominate for the COTW as not stub, but still very brief.
Reason
Extensively linked-to article which is currently very far from comprehensive and lacks references.
Support
  1. 119 08:33, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Maurreen 04:22, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments

Reason
The cold war paranoia film!
Support
  1. Litefantastic 00:17, 24 Feb 2005 (UTC)
  2. Circeus 00:57, Feb 24, 2005 (UTC)
  3. 119 05:00, 24 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Comments
  • I tried to get this passed to FA twice, and was shut down both times. When I discovered the COTW, I posted it there, but had to remove it when they told me things had to be stubs. Perhaps it will do better here. -Litefantastic 00:17, 24 Feb 2005 (UTC)